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Mike Young's avatar

Cute start

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Niccolò Hilgendorf's avatar

Thanks for reading Mike!

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Dan Blakely's avatar

This looks super fun! Looking forward to coming along for the ride and that Gravedeath... what a Complete Asshole! Love it.

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Niccolò Hilgendorf's avatar

Typical villain behavior am I right? Welcome to the adventure Dan, very happy to have you along and thanks for leaving a comment!

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Maurice Clive Bisby's avatar

Interesting Technique Niccolo, Writers Hook. Wish you Success ! Maurice

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Niccolò Hilgendorf's avatar

thank you Maurice :)

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Troy Church's avatar

Thats a fun opening.

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Niccolò Hilgendorf's avatar

Thanks Ugo! Welcome to the adventure 🤓

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